Mine- good idea for in and out of piece, technically could have been better Sam- Good technical transition into piece, would have liked to see him in more of it Dylan- kept eyes moving, needs better transition out of the piece john- lots of interaction with the piece, funny transitions in and out jade- not really a full transition because it starts in a sort of animated world, good job green screening matt- good idea of getting into piece, could have been executed a little better, stills in beginning maybe not the best idea josh- funny but needs better transitions ethan- good job getting in and out, but logically they do not work together
HOMEWORK
by monday at midnight need
-story board saved as pdf, minimum of 24 frames titled "A7NMD304CampbellFinalSB.pdf"
3 paragraph description of what you are narrativly and technically going to do in your final piece, each paragraph roughly 250 words, saved as a word document titled "A7NMD304CampbellFinalWD"
Finish reading Proust, be ready to ask and answer questions
sean-pretty good, could have used better green screening, comical sam-good conversion from here to there, could savor it some more. not as much self in piece as I'd like. dylan-cliche entrance/exit, interesting to see how the quick cuts worked. mine-pretty good, as ethan says, boring after the color. jade-cool effect for intro, but animated the whole time. could enter piece more technically. matt-funny intro, not too technical and never really enters the piece josh-entrance/exit abrupt, car riding scene is well done ethan-interesting, film part could be changed for logical reasons, funny movie posters
monday at midnight- 1-storyboard for final min. 24 frames 2-3 paragraph description of intent
campbell - heavy use of the pen tool might be a little much, the ending worked well when the hand brought you back into your piece
Sam - great transition in wish it was held longer, transition out was awkward and whats with the pill bottle
dylan - character doesn't move, transition in sucks and I don't get it, and why is the character only sometimes on the blue space you didn't explain that in your piece
John - green screen made you look transparent which worked well with the black and white but didn't work very well with the colored background
Jade - No transition in, vector graphics did fit the piece nicely
Matt - intro was a music video and lame, didn't go in or out of your piece
Josh - the boxed car through off the whole piece, your intro was interesting in that it reminded me of American Splendor however it needs to be timed better to pull of the effect you want
Ethan - continuity of the piece doesn't make any sense, is your character going inside his head or into the mirror, nice use of color
Monday
24 frame storyboard 3 paragraphs read the rest of the book for discusion
Sean Cambell-Cartoonizing is interesting, works well, unique from other projects
Sam Hoey-Easily one of the most impressive transitions done, nice use of color
Dylan Watt-Tough to cut in scenes since the original piece was so choppu, still well done
John Mondor-Great interaction with the piece, and nice use of color
Josh Smith- A little confusing with the transitions
Ethan-Transitions are well executed, nice use of color
Midnight Monday-24 Frame Storyboard Due Title A7-NMD304-Lastname-Pendleton-FSB Three Paragraph description on project no errors Name should be on the top
Sean- green screening the hand would look smoother, original idea compared to everyone else. Sam- intro looks great, cartoon self is an awesome effect. by far my favorite piece out of all. Dylan- A little too fast paced for me, but it keeps my attention. outro could have been a little longer. John Mondor- intro/outro is hilarious. the effect you put on yourself looks really interesting and helps you stand out in the piece. Josh- the car in your piece (black box) was a little weird but I thought your intro and outro worked really well. slow down intro and you could take the part of yourself without the backpack out so it isn't so inconsistent. Matt- intro/outro was funny but would look better live action. Ethan- I think you could have put yourself in the piece more.
HW: - Monday @ midnight have your storyboard for final done. 24 frams minimum. - 3 page description of what it is.
Monday at midnight: STORYBOARD NEEDS TO BE DONE AND MAILED TO RAPH. minimum of 24 panels. Should be named A7_304_smith_finalstoryboard saved as a PDF also, a 3 paragraph description of what i intend to do with the project. In a document, also mailed to raph. If not finished already, finish the proust book by tuesday, large discussion on it.
seans's > good consistency in transitions in and out of animated world
sam's > intro w/ pie animation for car starting is a good setup for transition into animated world
ethan's > into I was expecting for you to going into mirror or room, would create better understanding of end transition
josh > didn't understand transition into piece. sequence too quick.
dylan > dream transitions, black fade at end, bland. Burning in beginning is effective technical in transition.
jade > interactions within animated world well executed (hand turning on light and turning key) end transition when walking away and the turn at the end creates a little confusion
john > use of chord to enter computer generated world is clever.
matt > transitions difficult. quick flash frames of self in animated piece with particles is effective.
don't use 'like' and 'I feel like...' or cool explain what works and why it works or why it doesn't
monday next week by midnight story boards due for final > 24 frames/panels 3 paragraph description > narrative and technical finish book
Sean - The puppet transforms work great for the piece, making it crazy and zany. The underlying piece is a bit simplistic. Sam - All of the parts where you are green screened in are great. The places where you aren't feel a bit empty though. Dylan - The piece is cool and complicated, but it's somewhat repetitive. John - It all worked pretty well. The transitions from color to black and white were a bit jarring though. Jade - Entrance and exit are a bit abrupt and you are animated at all times Matt - The transition from the real world to the piece is way to abrupt and unexplained. Funny though. Josh - The camera you used seemed to have interlacing issues.
Monday next week by midnight Need full storyboards with at least 24 frames a 3 paragraph description of the storyboards, including both technical and narrative explanations
Critique Day-
ReplyDeleteMine- good idea for in and out of piece, technically could have been better
Sam- Good technical transition into piece, would have liked to see him in more of it
Dylan- kept eyes moving, needs better transition out of the piece
john- lots of interaction with the piece, funny transitions in and out
jade- not really a full transition because it starts in a sort of animated world, good job green screening
matt- good idea of getting into piece, could have been executed a little better, stills in beginning maybe not the best idea
josh- funny but needs better transitions
ethan- good job getting in and out, but logically they do not work together
HOMEWORK
by monday at midnight need
-story board saved as pdf, minimum of 24 frames
titled "A7NMD304CampbellFinalSB.pdf"
3 paragraph description of what you are narrativly and technically going to do in your final piece, each paragraph roughly 250 words, saved as a word document titled "A7NMD304CampbellFinalWD"
Finish reading Proust, be ready to ask and answer questions
sean-pretty good, could have used better green screening, comical
ReplyDeletesam-good conversion from here to there, could savor it some more. not as much self in piece as I'd like.
dylan-cliche entrance/exit, interesting to see how the quick cuts worked.
mine-pretty good, as ethan says, boring after the color.
jade-cool effect for intro, but animated the whole time. could enter piece more technically.
matt-funny intro, not too technical and never really enters the piece
josh-entrance/exit abrupt, car riding scene is well done
ethan-interesting, film part could be changed for logical reasons, funny movie posters
monday at midnight-
1-storyboard for final
min. 24 frames
2-3 paragraph description of intent
A7NMD304MondorJFinalSB.pdf
A7NMD304MondorJWD.doc
Tuesday-discussion on Proust.
Due Monday by Midnight or sooner:
ReplyDeleteStoryboard for final - 24frame minimum
Also - 2 or 3 paragraphs on intent for final.
File naming:
A7NMD304LastnameWD.doc
A7NMD304LastnameSB.pdf
Tuesday - Classmates teaching class
IF you have not finished Proust, make sure you do so.
campbell - heavy use of the pen tool might be a little much, the ending worked well when the hand brought you back into your piece
ReplyDeleteSam - great transition in wish it was held longer, transition out was awkward and whats with the pill bottle
dylan - character doesn't move, transition in sucks and I don't get it, and why is the character only sometimes on the blue space you didn't explain that in your piece
John - green screen made you look transparent which worked well with the black and white but didn't work very well with the colored background
Jade - No transition in, vector graphics did fit the piece nicely
Matt - intro was a music video and lame, didn't go in or out of your piece
Josh - the boxed car through off the whole piece, your intro was interesting in that it reminded me of American Splendor however it needs to be timed better to pull of the effect you want
Ethan - continuity of the piece doesn't make any sense, is your character going inside his head or into the mirror, nice use of color
Monday
24 frame storyboard
3 paragraphs
read the rest of the book for discusion
Critique
ReplyDeleteSean Cambell-Cartoonizing is interesting, works well, unique from other projects
Sam Hoey-Easily one of the most impressive transitions done, nice use of color
Dylan Watt-Tough to cut in scenes since the original piece was so choppu, still well done
John Mondor-Great interaction with the piece, and nice use of color
Josh Smith- A little confusing with the transitions
Ethan-Transitions are well executed, nice use of color
Midnight Monday-24 Frame Storyboard Due
Title A7-NMD304-Lastname-Pendleton-FSB
Three Paragraph description on project no errors
Name should be on the top
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ReplyDelete+ Final storyboard sue monday by midnight
ReplyDelete- E-mail it to Raph
- Min of 24 frames
- 750 word description of project
- Finish Proust
+Assignment names
- A7_NMD304_LastName_FinalSB.PDF
- A7_NMD304_LastName_WD.doc
NMD 304- Notes
ReplyDeleteSean- green screening the hand would look smoother, original idea compared to everyone else.
Sam- intro looks great, cartoon self is an awesome effect. by far my favorite piece out of all.
Dylan- A little too fast paced for me, but it keeps my attention. outro could have been a little longer.
John Mondor- intro/outro is hilarious. the effect you put on yourself looks really interesting and helps you stand out in the piece.
Josh- the car in your piece (black box) was a little weird but I thought your intro and outro worked really well. slow down intro and you could take the part of yourself without the backpack out so it isn't so inconsistent.
Matt- intro/outro was funny but would look better live action.
Ethan- I think you could have put yourself in the piece more.
HW:
- Monday @ midnight have your storyboard for final done. 24 frams minimum.
- 3 page description of what it is.
A7_NMD304_FNLN_WD
Next class have book read
After chatting with a few other people, here's what I have pieced together about what's due Monday by midnight:
ReplyDeletestoryboard with at least 24 stills
name: A7NMD304BoulierSB
2-3 paragraphs of project intent both conceptually and technically
name: A7NMD304BoulierWD
Finish reading Proust, discussion begins next Tuesday
Monday at midnight: STORYBOARD NEEDS TO BE DONE AND MAILED TO RAPH.
ReplyDeleteminimum of 24 panels.
Should be named A7_304_smith_finalstoryboard
saved as a PDF
also, a 3 paragraph description of what i intend to do with the project. In a document, also mailed to raph.
If not finished already, finish the proust book by tuesday, large discussion on it.
critique of a5
ReplyDeleteseans's > good consistency in transitions in and out of animated world
sam's > intro w/ pie animation for car starting is a good setup for transition into animated world
ethan's > into I was expecting for you to going into mirror or room, would create better understanding of end transition
josh > didn't understand transition into piece. sequence too quick.
dylan > dream transitions, black fade at end, bland. Burning in beginning is effective technical in transition.
jade > interactions within animated world well executed (hand turning on light and turning key) end transition when walking away and the turn at the end creates a little confusion
john > use of chord to enter computer generated world is clever.
matt > transitions difficult. quick flash frames of self in animated piece with particles is effective.
don't use 'like' and 'I feel like...' or cool
explain what works and why it works or why it doesn't
monday next week by midnight
story boards due for final > 24 frames/panels
3 paragraph description > narrative and technical
finish book
Sean - The puppet transforms work great for the piece, making it crazy and zany. The underlying piece is a bit simplistic.
ReplyDeleteSam - All of the parts where you are green screened in are great. The places where you aren't feel a bit empty though.
Dylan - The piece is cool and complicated, but it's somewhat repetitive.
John - It all worked pretty well. The transitions from color to black and white were a bit jarring though.
Jade - Entrance and exit are a bit abrupt and you are animated at all times
Matt - The transition from the real world to the piece is way to abrupt and unexplained. Funny though.
Josh - The camera you used seemed to have interlacing issues.
Monday next week by midnight
Need full storyboards with at least 24 frames
a 3 paragraph description of the storyboards, including both technical and narrative explanations
Finish the book by tuesday